I wrote a song..Do you like it?Rate 1-10 ?

Mmm I'd say 7. It's nicely written I'm guessing It would be a sort of rap song maybe? But of course every song has room for improvment (or most :P) I don't know I guess the little part at the start where it ryhmes just isn't my thing. Makes it seem kinda kidish. But thats just me! Anyway it's pretty good! It's clear that her love makes you feel like your on drugs (weather you really are doesn't matter :P) For me the song seems to describe the girl as btoh extremely y and extremely beautiful. Which is a plus! Anyway if you stare at it just a bit longer you might be able to make even small little changes that could make it 10 times better! But it's very good! :D